On Thursday I had a meeting with the professor who teaches the poetry writing class I’m taking this semester. It was supposed to be a meeting to talk about my personal “ars poetica” or whatnot.
Afterward, I was all like, “Did I just have a meeting with a literature professor where I used the phrase ‘I think it was the lizard people’?” In short, I had failed to do what I had planned: you know, act like a normal person and make up some !@#$ about why I was taking his class and what I wanted to do with the poetry I was writing.
Instead, I ended up being completely honest. Before I knew it, I was telling him how I had always wanted to try incorporating poetry into my prose writing, and all about my crazy interactive narrative project and my idea of writing the magical incantations in the game in poetic form. I even showed him some of what I had tried to write.
Weirdly enough, being honest paid off, because he actually ended up convincing me not to give up on what I was trying to do, and he gave me some advice that really helped. So this morning, after my dog woke me up at 4 AM, I finished writing Micah’s incantation to Ublasti, a fire-fox spirit, and I’m actually pretty pleased with it:
“Awake Ublasti, foxy fire goddess…
Forget love, let’s play a Combustion game!
Reduce my enemies to ash and bone,
Ignite the air with your Nine Tails of Flame!”
I think the Lady Gaga reference is what does it for me…it really makes it sound like something Micah would come up with! My one worry is that the third line might be a bit dark.
This is supposed to be in iambic pentameter, but I’m really not sure if it’s correct–I guess I’ll find out next week when I share it with my poetry class. I can’t decide whether or not I should make a complete fool of myself and read it in Micah’s voice…but if I’ve got some accompanying art work to take along by then, I’ll bring it with me. I think the class would actually get a kick out of that.
(By the way, if anyone cares about this, it turns out my poetry professor was a writer for the “Wishbone” TV series–you know, the one with the Jack Russell Terrier that aired on PBS in the mid 90s? When this came out in class, one of the younger lit majors had a major fangirl moment, which was pretty funny.)